We will put stage directions instead of a lot of dialogue because too much dialogue can make the play very boring this is shown in the first episode of young Dracula of the script http://www.bbc.co.uk/writersroom/insight/childrens_drama.shtml
On the first scene part one of the script it shows very less dialogue but instead it shows a lot stage directions this is useful because as it's the first scene it'd want to grab the audiences attention and not bore them.
Tuesday, 22 November 2011
Friday, 4 November 2011
Structure of my documentary
Middle: We will show footage of the riots and the information that was shown on blackberry messenger and how it affected the riots by making it worse. When blackberry messenger got shut down for 2-3 days how this affected people. For this we will interview people to find out their opinion.
End: What people's opinion on blackberry's are for this we will also interview people.
How we will do this:
For the start of the documentary we will film couple of people asking them about if they think blackberry's are addictive and we'll shoot them saying wither yes or no. We might shoot this at break or lunch.
For the middle we will have to use the computer and get footage of the riots and edit it into the documentary and maybe show some Facebook status's of how people reacted when they found out that bbm wasn't working for couple of days. For this we can print screen some ones status and edit it onto our documentary.
For the end of the film we will get a couple of people: teachers, students or parents and they'll give us their opinion on blackberry's and how addictive they are.
Tuesday, 1 November 2011
my script
1. INT. HOUSE. MORNING.
Both jack and Susan are sitting on the kitchen table eating breakfast. They both talk vaguely and head off to the car and go work.
2. INT. WORKPLACE. AFTERNOON
Jack's at work he's very distracted doesn't do much work
3. EXT. FRONT YARD. EVENING
jack parks his car and couple minutes later Susan comes but in another mans car who has dropped her off.
Jack gives him weird looks and just goes inside just before Susan comes over and tries to give him a hug.
4. INT. BEDROOM. NIGHT.
Susan's reading a book tries making a conversation with him but jack's still avoiding her and just walks out the room and goes out
5. INT. KITCHEN. MORNING.
Susan wakes up a bit late she hears the door shut. when she comes down she sees that jack has already left which means she has to take a taxi and go work as he left without her.
6. INT. LIVING ROOM. EVENING.
Susan:
jack walks out the room.
7. INT. KITCHEN. MORNING.
jack sits on the table drinking coffee. Susan wakes up late again comes down and jack gives her breakfast
Jack:
Susan gives a vague smiles and sits down and drinks her coffee.
8. EXT. FRONT YARD. EVENING.
Susan gets dropped off by Phil (work colleague). They both go inside.
9. INT. BEDROOM. NIGHT.
after they go inside Susan goes into the bedroom jack gets angry pushes her against the wall and shouts at her. he starts hitting her and throws her in the bathroom and locks the door.
10. INT. LIVING ROOM. MORNING.
Both jack and Susan are sitting on the kitchen table eating breakfast. They both talk vaguely and head off to the car and go work.
2. INT. WORKPLACE. AFTERNOON
Jack's at work he's very distracted doesn't do much work
3. EXT. FRONT YARD. EVENING
jack parks his car and couple minutes later Susan comes but in another mans car who has dropped her off.
Jack gives him weird looks and just goes inside just before Susan comes over and tries to give him a hug.
4. INT. BEDROOM. NIGHT.
Susan's reading a book tries making a conversation with him but jack's still avoiding her and just walks out the room and goes out
5. INT. KITCHEN. MORNING.
Susan wakes up a bit late she hears the door shut. when she comes down she sees that jack has already left which means she has to take a taxi and go work as he left without her.
6. INT. LIVING ROOM. EVENING.
Susan:
Why didn't you wait for me today normally we go work together. why have you been avoiding me for. what have i done.Jack:
i don't care about all this if i ever see you with that guy ever again I'll break both yours and that bastards legs!
jack walks out the room.
7. INT. KITCHEN. MORNING.
jack sits on the table drinking coffee. Susan wakes up late again comes down and jack gives her breakfast
Jack:
Morning darling.
Susan gives a vague smiles and sits down and drinks her coffee.
8. EXT. FRONT YARD. EVENING.
Susan gets dropped off by Phil (work colleague). They both go inside.
9. INT. BEDROOM. NIGHT.
after they go inside Susan goes into the bedroom jack gets angry pushes her against the wall and shouts at her. he starts hitting her and throws her in the bathroom and locks the door.
10. INT. LIVING ROOM. MORNING.
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