scriptt.

 1. INT. HOUSE. MORNING.
Jack, 25 years old, in a smart suit, and Susan, 24 years old also in a smart suit, are sitting on the kitchen table eating breakfast. 

 Jack:

Morning darling, how are you?

Susan:

Yeah am okay, should we head off now?

they head off to the car and go work. 

(happy music)

2. INT. OFFICE. AFTERNOON

Jack sat with his head on the desk with a lot of papers around him.
Jack's at work he's very distracted doesn't do much work.

3. EXT. FRONT YARD. EVENING.

Jack's standing outside the house trying to open the door and a couple of minutes later Susan comes over but in another mans car who has dropped her off.

Jack:

who the hell is that?

Jack gives him weird looks and just goes inside just before Susan comes over and tries to give him a hug.

4. INT. BEDROOM. NIGHT.
Jack's sitting on the bed, Susan comes and sits near him.

Susan's reading a book and jack just walks out the room and goes out.

5. INT. BEDROOM. MORNING.

Susan wakes up a bit late she hears the door shut. 

Susan:

Jack are you there?

When she comes down she sees that jack has already left which means she has to take a taxi and go work as he left without her.

6. INT. LIVING ROOM. EVENING.
jack sitting on the sofa watching t.v. Susan comes and sits near him.

Susan:
Why didn't you wait for me today normally we go work together. why have you been avoiding me for. what have i done. 
 

Jack:
i don't know.


Susan:
who's what you on about, which guy?


Jack:
That man that you came home with yesterday him!


Susan:
That's just Phil he works with me. What's wrong with you?


Jack:
i don't care about all this if i ever see you with that guy ever again I'll break both yours and that bastards legs!

jack walks out the room.

7. INT. KITCHEN. MORNING. 

Jack sits on the table drinking coffee. Susan wakes up late again comes down and jack gives her breakfast he acts as if nothing happened. 

Jack:
Morning darling

Susan:

erm morning darling

Susan gives a vague smiles and sits down and drinks her coffee. 

 Jack:

should we head off?

Susan:

Yeah i think we should.

She gets her coat and they both head off for work.

8. EXT. FRONT YARD. EVENING.
Susan comes out of the car whilst jack is watching her from the bedroom window. Susan gets dropped off by Phil (work colleague). She goes inside.

Susan:

Bye Phil see you tomorrow.  

 She goes inside.

9. INT. BEDROOM. NIGHT.

Susan goes inside she goes to the bedroom.
Jack gets angry pushes her against the wall and shouts at her.

 Jack:

why the hell were you with that man?!

He starts hitting her. She sits there crying on the floor.  

Susan:

Stop hitting me what the hell have i done to you?!

He leaves the room.

(loud music)

10. INT. LIVING ROOM.  MORNING.
Jack's sat at the table having breakfast shouts out to Susan.

Jack: 

Susan are you coming?

Susan:

 I don't feel well today I'm not going to come.

Jack:

if you say so, I'll come check up on you at lunch, bye. 

 Susan comes downstairs with a luggage and leaves her house keys on the table, she pulls out her phone and dials a number.

Susan:

are you still up for it.. yes obviously i want to come with you. can't wait to see you. 

She puts her phone down into her pocket and then a car beeps from outside.

11. EXT. FRONT YARD. MORNING.
Susan gets her luggage and gets into the car. She has a last glance off her house and then gets into the car and they drive off.

We will put stage directions instead of a lot of dialogue because too much dialogue can make the play very boring this is shown in the first episode of young Dracula of the script http://www.bbc.co.uk/writersroom/insight/childrens_drama.shtml  
On the first scene part one of the script it shows very less dialogue but instead it shows a lot stage directions this is useful because as it's the first scene it'd want to grab the audiences attention and not bore them.  

Structure of my documentary

The start: will show blackberry's probably zoom into somebody's hand using their blackberry.

Middle: We will show footage of the riots and the information that was shown on blackberry messenger and how it affected the riots by making it worse. When blackberry messenger got shut down for 2-3 days how this affected people. For this we will interview people to find out their opinion.

End: What people's opinion on blackberry's are  for this we will also interview people.

How we will do this: 
For the start of the documentary we will film couple of people asking them about if they think blackberry's are addictive and we'll shoot them saying wither yes or no. We might shoot this at break or lunch.

For the middle we will have to use the computer and get footage of the riots and edit it into the documentary and maybe show some Facebook status's of how people reacted when they found out that bbm wasn't working for couple of days. For this we can print screen some ones status and edit it onto our documentary.  


For the end of the film we will get a couple of people: teachers, students or parents and they'll give us their opinion on blackberry's and how addictive they are.

my script

 1. INT. HOUSE. MORNING.
Both jack and Susan are sitting on the kitchen table eating breakfast. They both talk vaguely and head off to the car and go work.
   
2. INT. WORKPLACE. AFTERNOON
Jack's at work he's very distracted doesn't do much work


3. EXT. FRONT YARD. EVENING
jack parks his car and couple minutes later Susan comes but in another mans car who has dropped her off.
Jack gives him weird looks and just goes inside just before Susan comes over and tries to give him a hug.

4. INT. BEDROOM. NIGHT.
Susan's reading a book tries making a conversation with him but jack's still avoiding her and just walks out the room and goes out

5. INT. KITCHEN. MORNING.
Susan wakes up a bit late she hears the door shut. when she comes down she sees that jack has already left which means she has to take a taxi and go work as he left without her.

6. INT. LIVING ROOM. EVENING.
Susan:

Why didn't you wait for me today normally we go work together. why have you been avoiding me for. what have i done. 

Jack:

i don't care about all this if i ever see you with that guy ever again I'll break both yours and that bastards legs!

jack walks out the room.

7. INT. KITCHEN. MORNING. 
jack sits on the table drinking coffee. Susan wakes up late again comes down and jack gives her breakfast

Jack:

  Morning darling.

Susan gives a vague smiles and sits down and drinks her coffee.

8. EXT. FRONT YARD. EVENING. 
Susan gets dropped off by Phil (work colleague). They both go inside.

9. INT. BEDROOM. NIGHT.
after they go inside Susan goes into the bedroom jack gets angry pushes her against the wall and shouts at her. he starts hitting her and throws her in the bathroom and locks the door. 

10. INT. LIVING ROOM.  MORNING.

 

Questions we'll ask

Our documentary is about blackberry's so we will be asking children around the school if they think it is addictive but also we'll ask parents what they think of their children having a blackberry and how it has both affected them. We'll also ask teachers what they think of the blackberry and if it has affected children in lessons? We'll also ask teachers if they have blackberry's and if they also agree that it is addictive.

Scenes from my film

Locations:

- House (INT) in the morning
- Work place (INT) Afternoon
- Outside the house (EXT) Evening
- In the house (INT) Night
-  Kitchen (INT) morning
- Living room (INT) morning
- Bedroom (INT) Afternoon
- Work place (INT) Afternoon
- Outside the house (EXT) Evening 
- Living room (INT) Evening
- Bathroom (INT)  Night
- Living room (INT) morning

Anchor man scenes.

Locations:

• Board sign
• Street
• car park
• Street
• barber shop
• Wall
• Street
• News room
• Studio
• Pub
• House
• News room (weather section)
• Swimming pool
• newsroom
• Pub
• Newsroom
• Multiple scene ( old peoples home, Pub, House and a surgery)

Review of miracle fish

Locations:

• Mums Car
• Outside mums car
• Inside the classroom
• Outside in the playground
• In the reception
• In the nurses room
• in the reception
• Inside the hall
• In the corridor
• In the classroom
• in the staffroom
• In the corridor
• Inside the classroom
• In the staffroom
• On the stairs
• In the corridor
• Inside the classroom

My historical villain

Recently named the best Jack the Ripper book of all by the Journal of the Whitechapel Society, former private detective Bruce Paley spent over 12 years exhaustively researching his ground-breaking work, a favourite among Ripperologists and the subject of years of continuing debate and discussion on Casebook. 

Attacks ascribed to the Ripper typically involved female prostitutes from the slums whose throats were cut prior to abdominal mutilations. The removal of internal organs from at least three of the victims led to proposals that their killer possessed anatomical or surgical knowledge.

Suspects

Suffice to say genuine suspects are far fewer than the prolific authors of the genre would have us believe. In fact, to reduce them to only those with a genuine claim having been nominated by contemporary police officers, we are left with a mere four. They are:

• Kosminski, a poor Polish Jew resident in White chapel;
• Montague John Druitt, a 31 year old barrister and school teacher who committed suicide in December 1888;
• Michael Ostrog, a Russian-born multi-pseudonymous thief and confidence trickster, believed to be 55 years old in 1888, and detained in asylums on several occasions;
• Dr Francis J. Tumblety, 56 Years old, an American 'quack' doctor, who was arrested in November 1888 for offences of gross indecency, and fled the country later the same month, having obtained bail at a very high price.

My idea

Do young girls rely on make-up too much?

Film story

Our story there will be a man and a woman.

They just got newly married and they been together for 6 years and couple of months after their wedding he accuses her of seeing another guy in her work placement when she really isn't but he gets so insecure he doesn't believe her.At first he starts swearing at her and shouting and then gradually he starts getting violent and starts hitting her. He doesn't let her go work and makes her stay at home.

After a couple of weeks of keeping her in the house he locks her in the bathroom. She shouts and screams begging him to let her out but he doesn't instead he threatens to kill her. At first he gives her food.

Once he was going through her phone and sees a text message from that guy who she though that she was cheating on him with and he gets really angry and goes up to the bathroom open the door and he batters her leaving her lost of scars and bruises.  

http://prezi.com/unsd1b6430me/edit/?auth_key=icom5i5&follow=shum_56@hotmail.com

Steve Job- One of the America's creative's geniuses death!

iPhone, iPad, iPod and mac, the genius behind all the great creations has died. 

His death might have just caught even more people attention to the latest device Job's will ever unveil the iPhone 4s on October 14th. All these devices will get a huge sale boost as customers will pay as tribute for him.

Apple fans voiced their sadness all over social- networking sites for the man who put small laptops and transformed them into a phone.
Bill gates co-founder of microsoft quotes "The world rarely sees someone who has had the profound impact Steve has had, the effects of which will be felt for many generations to come. For those of us lucky enough to get to work with him, it's been an insanely great honour."
 

Did Katie Price dump former boyfriend leandro Penna because she wasn't getting enough action between the sheets?

It seemed that Katie Price had dumped her former boyfriend due to the language complications however it has been suggested that their chemistry in bed was just not up to her standards and that it was just a waste of time in her opinion which lead her to ending it with him.

Katie price just couldn't seem to realise how a man wouldn't want to be in bed with her all the time. As he couldn't talk much english being in bed was all she could think of.

Apparently Katie had hired a spanish translator to end it with him so she can say exactly what she wanted to. (HARSH)

Documentaries

Is kids beauty pageant good or bad?

Purpose of this documentary

The purpose of this documentary is to show people if children doing beauty pageants good or bad? Or is it just something that parents make their children to do. Does it help children boost their confidence or just damage their self esteem? Should children be allowed to do beauty pageant or should it just be a thing for adults? Also this documentary will show the in-sight of a kids beauty pageants, the clothe make-up, fake tan and money spent on a pageant but also the tears, anger and frustration. 

 Sad faces & Fake smiles

Many people think they're evil, claiming that the beauty pageants are more for the parents than for the children. The kids did not want to be in the beauty pageant, and it was obvious, but the moms threatened and intimidated them into going on stage. kids pageant should just be a hobby and not a life time thing. If they don't win, they might take it personally and get hurt feelings. The child might end up feeling unattractive.

However some children love the idea of child pageants it's the whole point of getting all dressed up and having fun. A pageant girl usually learns to be comfortable in front of strangers, giving her self-confidence a big boost. Pageants can be a lot of fun for kids. Most pageants sell foods that kids love, including pizza, hot dogs, popcorn, candy, and other snacks. Child pageants can teach kids to be gracious winners and good losers. They'll learn the aspects of rules and fair play.
 
In conclusion i think beauty pageants are good when parents can handle defeat and show their children how to show good sportsmanship and just learn from their mistakes instead of getting all frustrated and showing a negative vibe to their children. Some children don't want to do the pageants and when they get forced into doing it, it shows on stage from their facial expressions that their unhappy. Children should do beauty pageants but from their own will and not get forced into doing something that they don't want to do.

Comparing and contrasting clips

In the four clips i have seen i will be comparing and contrasting the videos to each other i will mainly be talking about the effects, music, background etc.

Danny Macaskill- Industrial Revolution video was quite simple and straight forward, the music was also like the video simple. The scenery was in a industrial place therefore the sight of the video was quite nice. The music also flowed nicely with actual video.The video didn't really have a story line to it, it was just a man showing different kind of tricks that he could do on a bike.

Which contrasts with the next clip Concrete circus- Keelan Philips Bmx release was more of a story of a guy who was visualising how he'll do the tricks he wants to do on the bike whereas the first clip it doesn't have the story line but also the scenery is different as the first one has a nice background with a lot of greenery however the other one is darker. Similarly they both have the music that go with their video but also the they both our about two great bike rider doing tricks on their bikes.

The next clip is Martin- A skate illustration is quite similar to the Industrial Revolution clip as both the scenery's are based outside but also they both have no story line it's just them doing a whole lot of tricks and they both have lots of long distance shots whereas the Keelan Philips Bmx release most of the shots in this video are close up.