Our story there will be a man and a woman.
They just got newly married and they been together for 6 years and couple of months after their wedding he accuses her of seeing another guy in her work placement when she really isn't but he gets so insecure he doesn't believe her.At first he starts swearing at her and shouting and then gradually he starts getting violent and starts hitting her. He doesn't let her go work and makes her stay at home.
After a couple of weeks of keeping her in the house he locks her in the bathroom. She shouts and screams begging him to let her out but he doesn't instead he threatens to kill her. At first he gives her food.
Once he was going through her phone and sees a text message from that guy who she though that she was cheating on him with and he gets really angry and goes up to the bathroom open the door and he batters her leaving her lost of scars and bruises.
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ReplyDeleteThis is a good start Shumana, you have the basis of your main characters and a basic plotline.
ReplyDeleteYour next step is to start to develop your characters and to break your treatment down into scenes.
What are your characters' names? Is there anything else we need to know about them?
Think about locations and how you are going to break up the events of your storyline.
Well done, good start.